The Commitments by Roddy Doyle

Excerpted from an article in Magill’s Survey of World Literature, Revised Edition

First published: 1987

Type of work: Novel

The Work

The picaresque character of James “Jimmy” Rabbitte, Jr., manages both the group The Commitments and the novel The Commitments. Rabbitte is the mastermind of the concept of “Dublin soul” after the first wave of punk rock in the 1980’s. He takes out a classified ad in the Hot Press, the alternative newspaper in Dublin, which attracts a truly motley crew of mostly young north-side Dubliners to play honest, straightforward rhythm and blues in the tradition of Motown Records, down to the white shirts and black suits for the men and simple black dinner dresses for the three Commitmentettes.

Doyle exquisitely shows the partially planned, partially haphazard manner in which most local bands form. At the same time, Doyle’s descriptions of the characters’ situations and their disarmingly unique and poetic Irish-English diction and syntax provide insights into what seems to be an exceptionally authentic rendering of working-class Irish urban culture. Critics have both praised and reviled Doyle for his willingness to use not only the colloquialisms and slang of regional dialect but also a good deal of profanity, including repeated usages of what are generally thought to be the crudest swear words. While Doyle generally declines comment on his work, his defenders usually praise his ability to render the local idiom of Dublin’s north side, and the profane diction seems consistent with the young adults who populate his fiction.

Other critics find limitations in this novel’s scant character development beyond that of Jimmy Rabbitte, Jr. However, the novel is only 165 pages long, and much of it contains either epigrammatic dialogue or the lyrics of dozens of 1950’s and 1960’s rhythm and blues hits. Other members of Jimmy’s immediate family, relegated perhaps to supporting status in this novel, essentially have their own novels later in the Barrytown trilogy. The Snapper is primarily Sharon Rabbitte’s novel and concerns her metamorphosing relationship with her family, especially her father, James Rabbitte, Sr.; The Van is primarily about the relationship of James, Sr., with his best friend, Bimbo.

As The Commitments begins to develop a regional following in the neighborhood, drummer Billy Mooney drops out because he cannot stomach that Declan “Deco” Cuffe, the band’s vocalist who never knew his own talent until he had twenty rum and blacks at the Christmas dinner dance and sang to the crowd while he was fully “locked,” has become an egotistical nightmare. The band’s senior citizen member, Joey “The Lips” Fagan, who purportedly played trumpet for James Brown, Otis Redding, and other great rhythm and blues artists in a long career, has returned to Dublin in his declining years to take care of his “Ma” and to mentor the band. His “mentoring” includes intimate escapades with two of the three Commitmentettes, which only exacerbates the internecine battles of ego and art that eventually derail the band just as it seems to be developing a reputation beyond its north-side neighborhood.

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