Fitting Ends by Dan Chaon

First published: 1995

Type of plot: Domestic realism

Time of work: The 1980's and the 1990's

Locale: Pyramid, a small village in Nebraska

Principal Characters:

  • Stewart, a man trying to piece together his past
  • Del, his brother
  • Their father and mother

The Story

Because "Fitting Ends" is about a man trying to fit all the loose ends of his life together into a coherent story, it does not have a chronological plot structure. Instead it revolves around various stories the narrator, Stewart, recalls from his childhood. The first such story, about his brother Del, which appears in a book titled More Tales of the Weird and Supernatural, recounts three different appearances of a ghostly figure walking on the railroad tracks near the nearly deserted village of Pyramid, Nebraska, and then falling on his knees in front of a train. A few years after these supposed sightings began, Del, who was seventeen at the time, was killed by a train while walking along the tracks.

About a year before he died, Del saved Stewart's life. The two brothers had gone to the top of the grain elevator to fix a hole. While Stewart was clowning around dancing and singing, he slipped, but Del caught his arm and pulled him back up. However, when the boys' father grabbed Stewart to punish him for his foolishness, Stewart said that Del had pushed him. The boys' father believed the lie because Del had a history of violence against his brother; he had just returned from a special program for juvenile delinquents after trying to strangle Stewart. When they were younger, Del had thrown a can of motor oil at Stewart's head and pushed him out of a moving pickup truck. The boys' parents never find out about Stewart's lie.

In the next section of the story, Stewart, who now has a job at a small private college in upstate New York, is married, and has had his first child, comes to visit his mother, who has gone deaf, just after her sixtieth birthday. During the visit, when Stewart and his father are sitting together one evening, Stewart brings up the time he almost fell off the elevator but does not confess to the lie, saying only the event "seems significant sometimes."

The story then moves back to an account of the strained relationship between Stewart and Del after the incident on the grain elevator. Stewart knew there was no way out of the situation he had created, and after a while Del stopped denying that he had tried to push Stewart, perhaps beginning to believe that he had. Until his death, Del remained a defiant and belligerent young man. The story ends with Stewart watching his deaf mother moving about in the kitchen during his visit, thinking that at such a moment, everything seems clear to him.